Talk:Great Gap - A Pinch Space Story/@comment-38112131-20190114172202

Matt, I am completely at a loss as to how to add pages and notes. It all comes up as a complete mess. You're going to have to walk me through it. For scene five, and I'm thinking that if we switch POV with every scene, then we should probably go ahead and make a new chapter for every scene. If you see what I mean. My scenes tend to run fifteen hundred words like clockwork. It's a super-short chapter, but there doesn't seem to be any sense in arbitrarily setting chapters at three thousand or five thousand words when were going to have to denote and separate POV changes anyway. I'm thinking this scene is where we see Skyler and Salome tracking down Skyler's connection to may be able to jerry-rig something they can use to break the pilot out of guild control. I don't know whether this would be something so difficult that hardly anybody can do it, or something so illegal that hardly anybody dares to do it, or both. What do you think?