Talk:Great Gap - A Pinch Space Story/@comment-38112131-20190117234141

Brilliant work. Very rough is perfect. Allows us all to wiggle in.

I'm a big fan of 3rd person past tense.

voices and pov are going be a trick to juggle. I've been thinking third person past with each of us following one or two characters--standing over their shoulders. That allows us each to write the character we understand best while giving the reader each character's differing perspective on the others.

Other thoughts?